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I Love You, Not

Post  Lala:D on Wed Aug 19 2009, 09:15

"I love you" He says as they sit under their tree. The tree where they first met.
"Well, I love you too." She says to him. Then takes his hand and holds it.
"But do you love me how I love you?" He asks with all the courage he could bring together.
"What do you mean?" She looks at him confusingly.
"I mean I love you, like more than friends. I love the way you walk. I love the way you talk. I love the way you smell. I love your sence of humor. You can always make me laugh. I love the way you always can make me smile whenever I see you. I Love You, Rachael." He takes a step toward her. She is frozen in place. She has shock and horror on her face.
"I only love you as a friend." She says to him. And as she said those words his heart broke. He didnt know what to say. The girl he thought he loved didnt love him. He turns and walks away. With a hole in his chest and his heart sqeezed in her hands.
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Re: I Love You, Not

Post  KrussianRussian on Wed Aug 19 2009, 09:30

I like the stories and poems you put on here. They're all so descriptive.
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